tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554217814767311103.post5949800005792661328..comments2023-10-30T08:24:48.585-07:00Comments on Stanimation Productions: Santa in San Franciscostanimation productionshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07095948940862311043noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554217814767311103.post-86046395007619721342009-08-04T03:41:44.751-07:002009-08-04T03:41:44.751-07:00Thank you for your commentsThank you for your commentsstanimationproductionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06930187517086867086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554217814767311103.post-49839564327919141092009-08-03T03:16:24.811-07:002009-08-03T03:16:24.811-07:00I agree with Ronda - Resoivour Dogs eat your heart...I agree with Ronda - Resoivour Dogs eat your heart out.<br /><br />Welcome to Friday Fiction - I hope you enjoyed dipping your toes in.<br /><br />Your Piece demonstrates exactly what its set up for - getting the blood on the page, putting out the ideas in whatever order there is - allowing the reader to see the gems hidden amongst the padding.<br /><br />You used some nice touches - "He came down from the sky on his sled with his reindeer ringing the bells like a troop of soldiers at war" - reflecting exactly where the story was going and his mood all in one.<br /><br />I'd be interested in seeing this tightened up a good 20% less words would make a huge difference to the snappy message you are conveying.<br /><br />Thanks again for playing - see you next week.<br />Visitors can see my entry at<br />http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/07/where-shall-we-meet.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554217814767311103.post-87679607651187717382009-07-31T06:31:37.525-07:002009-07-31T06:31:37.525-07:00Wow...heheh..You're like the Quinten Tarrantin...Wow...heheh..You're like the Quinten Tarrantino of art... Descriptions are good. <br /><br />Read mine at http://writingresearchediting.com/blog.phpRonda Bowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06305993401369357129noreply@blogger.com